language connotation is the association of the meaning, the feeling of the words.
I looked around the quad the sun was shining bright not a single cloud in sight. You knew it was a warm day everyone looked more cheerful and had a bright glow about them the trees also swayed cheerfully in the warm breeze; it was such a nice day you just wanted to bask in the sunshine. Today everybody wanted to just enjoy the weather while it lasted not thinking about past present or future. time slipped away as the suns radiance blessed everyone with vitamin D.
I scanned around the quad the sun was beaming and blinding not a single cloud to seek refuge to. You knew it was a boiling day everyone looked more lifeless and had a dull burn about them the trees also rocked violently in the inferno gust; it was such a horrid day you just wanted to burn in the scorch. Today everybody wanted to just escape the weather while it lasted thinking about past present or future for a escape. time froze as the suns blaze cursed everyone with vitamin D.
extended metaphor: like a regular metaphor, and extended metaphor looks to draw on the shared figurative characteristics of two concepts. In order to extended the device , you should consider how language connotations, similes, metaphors and other devices combine throughout a piece to continually convey the shared characteristic
I scanned around the quad the sun was beaming and blinding not a single cloud to seek refuge to. You knew it was a boiling day everyone looked more lifeless and had a dull burn about them the trees also rocked violently in the inferno gust; it was such a horrid day you just wanted to burn in the scorch. The quad was a island populated by all sorts of wild animals some big some small. Some smart some not so. The thing about this island was not that it was surrounded by water it was surrounded by a concrete ocean of a school. Today everybody wanted to just escape the weather while it lasted thinking about past present or future for a escape. time froze as the suns blaze cursed everyone with vitamin D.